| Walk Cycle - Sean Riley | |
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Sean R
Posts : 198 Join date : 2009-09-25 Age : 33 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Walk Cycle - Sean Riley Wed Oct 14, 2009 5:35 pm | |
| Here is my walk cycle so far... | |
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TheSpartanMoose
Posts : 35 Join date : 2009-09-25 Age : 31 Location : Greasby
| Subject: Re: Walk Cycle - Sean Riley Wed Oct 14, 2009 5:40 pm | |
| Nice | |
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andrew foden
Posts : 231 Join date : 2009-09-25 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: Walk Cycle - Sean Riley Sun Oct 18, 2009 1:22 am | |
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Sean R
Posts : 198 Join date : 2009-09-25 Age : 33 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Walk Cycle - Sean Riley Mon Oct 19, 2009 2:14 pm | |
| I tried to make the arms look more like they were marching and its now more cartoon-looking. Overall I think it looks much better, sorry for it being kinda small. I also added some detail. Next I think i'll smooth it out and add colour ^^ | |
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ORCHARD Admin
Posts : 206 Join date : 2009-09-24 Location : Merseyside
| Subject: Re: Walk Cycle - Sean Riley Mon Oct 19, 2009 2:20 pm | |
| Hi Sean, Your character is really improving especially with the extra detail, it now looks and moves like a cartoon soldier, cant wait to see him in colour! | |
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Hick3y1 :D
Posts : 136 Join date : 2009-09-28
| Subject: Re: Walk Cycle - Sean Riley Wed Oct 21, 2009 3:21 pm | |
| very similar to my guy needs the color now | |
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Lucy Mayo
Posts : 98 Join date : 2009-09-28 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Walk Cycle - Sean Riley Wed Oct 21, 2009 3:23 pm | |
| Nice, the added detail makes it look much better | |
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stebrown
Posts : 41 Join date : 2009-09-25 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Walk Cycle - Sean Riley Wed Oct 21, 2009 3:23 pm | |
| Looks good but the legs appear to get smaller. | |
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Colin Peters
Posts : 117 Join date : 2009-09-25 Age : 33 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Walk Cycle - Sean Riley Wed Oct 21, 2009 3:28 pm | |
| looks cool, like the soldier idea the walk is looking good too | |
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Sgste Sammons
Posts : 122 Join date : 2009-09-25 Age : 30 Location : Earth
| Subject: Re: Walk Cycle - Sean Riley Wed Oct 21, 2009 3:36 pm | |
| really cool! Love the mask and glasses! I can't help but expect him to pull out a grenade, scream 'Praise to Allah' and blow up... but maybe that's just me... | |
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Sean R
Posts : 198 Join date : 2009-09-25 Age : 33 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Walk Cycle - Sean Riley Wed Oct 21, 2009 5:30 pm | |
| I coloured in the helmet ;D I also made the leg bigger on one of the frames to try and make it not look as if it was getting smaller (thanks Ste) Hoping to finish more very soon ^^ The colours look off because of the gif thing... next time i'll upload one in better quality (if i can) This is what its meant to look like | |
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Sean R
Posts : 198 Join date : 2009-09-25 Age : 33 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Walk Cycle - Sean Riley Mon Nov 02, 2009 4:48 pm | |
| Here is my updated walk cycle. Again I don't know how to change the quality of animated gifs on flash so the colours are a bit off but you still get the idea. It's now got the basic colours and the first frame has a camo pattern on but the rest of the frames don't yet... It's taking quite a while to do all the camo >.< | |
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Sean R
Posts : 198 Join date : 2009-09-25 Age : 33 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Walk Cycle - Sean Riley Mon Nov 02, 2009 5:15 pm | |
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I got bored of adding the camo for now and decided to shade it instead. Will add the camo soon enough, I also finally found out we can host swf files and upload them... so its no longer a mis-coloured gif ^^
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Ozzfest
Posts : 88 Join date : 2009-09-25
| Subject: Re: Walk Cycle - Sean Riley Mon Nov 02, 2009 5:39 pm | |
| it really looks good. his right leg gets skinnier but its hardly noticeable | |
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Sean R
Posts : 198 Join date : 2009-09-25 Age : 33 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Walk Cycle - Sean Riley Mon Nov 02, 2009 5:57 pm | |
| Yeah I tried making it bigger like so many times, but then it just made it seem smaller in another area. I can't get it perfectly right >.<
Theres my finished walk cycle I think... Maybe if anybody makes a decent suggestion I'll add it but for now that's it ^^ | |
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Burrows
Posts : 210 Join date : 2009-09-28 Age : 33 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Walk Cycle - Sean Riley Mon Nov 02, 2009 6:22 pm | |
| I love it tbh, looks really good. If you have I would say put a gun on his back of something, like some equipment, would make it perfect tbh!
Cheers for letting us know u can upload .swf files aswell, cos the quality on my walk cycle and noticably alot of other ppls walk cycles have been quite low. | |
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andrew foden
Posts : 231 Join date : 2009-09-25 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: Walk Cycle - Sean Riley Mon Nov 02, 2009 7:04 pm | |
| that's looking fantastic :) especially the hands. I'd give him a pistol in his right hand though, which would be easier than sticking it on his back because you wouldn't have animate it much. | |
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Sean R
Posts : 198 Join date : 2009-09-25 Age : 33 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Walk Cycle - Sean Riley Mon Nov 02, 2009 10:14 pm | |
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I tried to add a gun but it just looked out of place. I would have to re-do the entire walk to make his hand look weighted =[ Also adding one to his back will take too much time because of the way i've coloured it I can't layer it. I also need to finish other work off so I don't really have time, but hey it's something I can say about it that it needs improving!
I added this simple line so it looked like he was moving in a direction, whilst staying in the middle. This is going to be my finished walk cycle for wednesday ^^
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michaelbishop
Posts : 73 Join date : 2009-09-29 Age : 32 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Walk Cycle - Sean Riley Mon Nov 02, 2009 10:46 pm | |
| Love it, walks really well | |
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ORCHARD Admin
Posts : 206 Join date : 2009-09-24 Location : Merseyside
| Subject: Re: Walk Cycle - Sean Riley Tue Nov 03, 2009 12:30 am | |
| Just check the floor Sean, it seems to be moving faster than the man is walking | |
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Sean R
Posts : 198 Join date : 2009-09-25 Age : 33 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Walk Cycle - Sean Riley Tue Nov 03, 2009 12:46 am | |
| okay thanks Clare i'll fix that by wednesday ^^ | |
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Paul Wilson 1990
Posts : 228 Join date : 2009-09-25 Age : 33 Location : Kirkby
| Subject: Re: Walk Cycle - Sean Riley Thu Nov 05, 2009 10:26 pm | |
| good walk cycle sean | |
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Kingsalmonattack
Posts : 80 Join date : 2009-09-25 Age : 35 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Walk Cycle - Sean Riley Sun Nov 08, 2009 6:51 pm | |
| Is it me or does the head appear to get slightly bigger and then smaller again over the course of the loop? | |
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Alex.P
Posts : 208 Join date : 2009-09-30 Age : 35 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Walk Cycle - Sean Riley Sun Nov 08, 2009 11:02 pm | |
| yes ever so slightly, the walk itself is amazing though, just fix the issue with the shrinking head and get rid of the moving floor and i swear you could get an brilliant mark for this, the walk is really clear and everything looks clean and well coloured | |
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Hick3y1 :D
Posts : 136 Join date : 2009-09-28
| Subject: Re: Walk Cycle - Sean Riley Fri Nov 20, 2009 6:33 pm | |
| looking good jus need to change his walk tho i dont see that many happy soilders | |
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