Animation Pitch - Michael Bishop

Theme stated – Buddy Love

Setup – Father and son are playing football in a park

Catalyst - The ball is kicked somewhere in the park they cannot reach

Debate – Think weather he wants to get the ball back

Break into act 2 - When trying to get the ball a pigeon stops him

B story – The Pigeon has a flash back of when he meet the father before and he didn’t give him any bread

Fun & games – The father keeps trying to get the ball back but the pigeon is trying everything to stop him. The pigeon Shoos the father away when he tries to get the ball first time, the second time the pigeon pecks his hand as he goes to get the ball and the third time father gets attacked by many pigeons as he goes for the ball again.

Midpoint – The father begins to think how to get the ball.

Bad guys close in – The Mother turns up at the park to pick them both up putting pressure on the father to hurry up.



All is lost – The father finds out that he can’t get the ball because of the pigeons.

Break into act three – The son goes up and gives the bird some food, well he is feeding the bird he takes the ball.

Finale – The family leaves with the ball

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Ok we got an update to where im up to

http://img717.imageshack.us/i/11193202.swf/

i really like this lmao, its simple and really cool ^^ good job

I love the way the mum picking them up is the bad guys close in bit lol. I reckon this is a really good idea

haha i do like your idea aswell bishop, simple but effective

Pigeons -_-
Cool and simple idea, love to see some more

It's be hilarious if the bird is this tiny thing.

I really like it, can't wait to see it!

haha, the bird preventing him to get the ball. tough bird. looks good though

loved this ! the birds attacking is sweet jus get more animation!!!