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Jake
Posts : 66 Join date : 2009-10-04 Age : 114 Location : wirral
| Subject: Unit 65 Task 1 Wed Oct 14, 2009 1:01 pm | |
| Squash and stretch: When somthing hits somthing else, it squashes with the impact. If it mvoes fast it will stretch slightly like a bouncy ball bouncing, it squashes when it hits the ground and stretches when it leaves. Follow Through: If you throw a ball, after you have thrown it your body follows your arm through with the momentum you built up. Exagguration: Where movements and actions are done over the top and big Balance: Balance is when you put an equal wieght on the opposite side of sothing to stop it falling. Secondary action: When you move your hand up, your forearm and upper arm with move with it. Character Personality: Character personality is how the person moves, like an old person would walk slowly and carefully, or a very fat person would "waddle" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1i2sYcYdsbo | |
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Jake
Posts : 66 Join date : 2009-10-04 Age : 114 Location : wirral
| Subject: Character Model Wed Oct 21, 2009 1:21 pm | |
| I started off making the head from a box This wasn't going well, so I started to model the body. This wasn't going great either, so I started over, following a tutorial on the internet. changing it so its relevant to my character. This is the basic head shape I started with, without anything shaped. I then shaped the nose. I modelled the eye, this took a lot of time to do. Then done the mouth Then I shaped the head | |
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DrCuddles
Posts : 148 Join date : 2009-10-21 Age : 34 Location : Liverpool, UK
| Subject: Re: Unit 65 Task 1 Wed Oct 21, 2009 4:49 pm | |
| Looking good so far Jake, looks a bit choppy though, maybe work on making the face less flat and get it curving round? | |
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Declan
Posts : 59 Join date : 2009-09-30 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: Unit 65 Task 1 Wed Oct 21, 2009 6:28 pm | |
| It looks like you've bit off more than you can chew with all of those polygons, and starting from a square to be honest Jake. You should try modelling individual parts of the face from a single polygon first, and then connecting them up later, right now everything looks very out of proportion. | |
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Kimmy (JH)
Posts : 179 Join date : 2009-09-30 Age : 31 Location : A 2D plane of existence
| Subject: Re: Unit 65 Task 1 Sun Nov 01, 2009 10:57 pm | |
| Looks good for a zombie just needs to be more rounded | |
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Kizz (AW)
Posts : 95 Join date : 2009-09-30 Age : 31 Location : Whereever I lay my phone (that's my home)
| Subject: Re: Unit 65 Task 1 Mon Nov 02, 2009 10:40 pm | |
| I'm liking the model, Jake. I like how you've shown exactly how you went about doing everything in steps. The model is looking pretty good but it looks a bit jagged in places. You may need to move some of the points around a bit so that it has a more rounded, natural shape. It's hard to pull off but I'm sure it'll be worth it. Keep it up, bro bro bro your boat. | |
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Kimmy (JH)
Posts : 179 Join date : 2009-09-30 Age : 31 Location : A 2D plane of existence
| Subject: Re: Unit 65 Task 1 Mon Nov 02, 2009 11:01 pm | |
| Your take on body looks interesting but I would say add more vertical lines so its not a flat chest and back. Sholders are really well done | |
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DrCuddles
Posts : 148 Join date : 2009-10-21 Age : 34 Location : Liverpool, UK
| Subject: Re: Unit 65 Task 1 Mon Nov 02, 2009 11:16 pm | |
| Looks like he's going to be rather short as well, unless you where going for a Dwarf Zombie. | |
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Kimmy (JH)
Posts : 179 Join date : 2009-09-30 Age : 31 Location : A 2D plane of existence
| Subject: Re: Unit 65 Task 1 Mon Nov 02, 2009 11:30 pm | |
| - DrCuddles wrote:
- Looks like he's going to be rather short as well, unless you where going for a Dwarf Zombie.
I think he is short because its gonna be a limping zombie. You might wanna follow declans advice and make legs seprate from body and not extrude from body.
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DrCuddles
Posts : 148 Join date : 2009-10-21 Age : 34 Location : Liverpool, UK
| Subject: Re: Unit 65 Task 1 Mon Nov 02, 2009 11:37 pm | |
| - Kimmy (JH) wrote:
- DrCuddles wrote:
- Looks like he's going to be rather short as well, unless you where going for a Dwarf Zombie.
he is doing hunched over I think also jake, I think the was your goign so far might make it harder for legs might wanan re-think things for that part maybe use declans idea and make them seprate. Has anyone really been far even as decided to use even go want to do look more like? | |
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Karl
Posts : 49 Join date : 2009-10-24
| Subject: Re: Unit 65 Task 1 Mon Nov 02, 2009 11:43 pm | |
| - Kimmy (JH) wrote:
he is doing hunched over I think also jake, I think the was your goign so far might make it harder for legs might wanan re-think things for that part maybe use declans idea and make them seprate. Interesting critique Jack but I feel the odd sentence structure limits the points you can make. Perhaps consider rounding out your vowels or something. Perhaps post some initial sketches of this sentence so we can see where it began? | |
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Kimmy (JH)
Posts : 179 Join date : 2009-09-30 Age : 31 Location : A 2D plane of existence
| Subject: Re: Unit 65 Task 1 Tue Nov 03, 2009 12:45 am | |
| - Karl wrote:
- Kimmy (JH) wrote:
he is doing hunched over I think also jake, I think the was your goign so far might make it harder for legs might wanan re-think things for that part maybe use declans idea and make them seprate. Interesting critique Jack but I feel the odd sentence structure limits the points you can make. Perhaps consider rounding out your vowels or something. Perhaps post some initial sketches of this sentence so we can see where it began? I hope the new version mets your standards. inb4 it doesn't | |
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DrCuddles
Posts : 148 Join date : 2009-10-21 Age : 34 Location : Liverpool, UK
| Subject: Re: Unit 65 Task 1 Tue Nov 03, 2009 1:18 am | |
| It still doesn't! - Kimmy (JH) wrote:
- Karl wrote:
- Kimmy (JH) wrote:
he is doing hunched over I think also jake, I think the was your goign so far might make it harder for legs might wanan re-think things for that part maybe use declans idea and make them seprate. Interesting critique Jack but I feel the odd sentence structure limits the points you can make. Perhaps consider rounding out your vowels or something. Perhaps post some initial sketches of this sentence so we can see where it began? I hope the new version mets your standards. inb4 it doesn't DAMMIT! | |
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Joe
Posts : 20 Join date : 2009-09-29 Age : 32 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Unit 65 Task 1 Tue Nov 03, 2009 2:34 am | |
| Like been mentioned before try and round your body off abit so it looks more organic the head is looking good i really like the mouth . | |
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Jake
Posts : 66 Join date : 2009-10-04 Age : 114 Location : wirral
| Subject: Re: Unit 65 Task 1 Tue Nov 03, 2009 12:31 pm | |
| These are two screenshots from when I was making and shaping the body. I completely redone the body again and it ended up alot better I think Some screenshots from making the hand. | |
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Kizz (AW)
Posts : 95 Join date : 2009-09-30 Age : 31 Location : Whereever I lay my phone (that's my home)
| Subject: Re: Unit 65 Task 1 Sun Nov 08, 2009 10:50 pm | |
| I like the look of the hand so far. Honestly, I can totally see it and everything.
It's rad. | |
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AdoptedKey
Posts : 101 Join date : 2009-09-30 Age : 32 Location : Not Liverpool, that's for sure.
| Subject: Re: Unit 65 Task 1 Tue Nov 10, 2009 3:00 am | |
| Holy hell, those hands are amazing. Still, the head is looking really good. It just requires some make-up to hide the mutated tumors. Still, for a more advanced model than everyone elses other than Declans, you're making good progress. Please to be continuing. Post feet or gtfo. | |
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DrCuddles
Posts : 148 Join date : 2009-10-21 Age : 34 Location : Liverpool, UK
| Subject: Re: Unit 65 Task 1 Tue Nov 10, 2009 3:31 am | |
| Those hands are really good! Get some more details on everything and good times | |
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AdeleBurghall
Posts : 62 Join date : 2009-10-05
| Subject: Re: Unit 65 Task 1 Mon Nov 23, 2009 3:17 pm | |
| head is looking good so far would like to see some of the body now and some sketches of what the final model will be | |
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xFUBARx CrYpTIc
Posts : 50 Join date : 2009-09-30 Age : 33 Location : Yo Face!
| Subject: Re: Unit 65 Task 1 Tue Dec 08, 2009 6:33 pm | |
| Dude this zombie is awesome! The heads looks BOSS!!
Cant wait to see the final piece = ] | |
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AdeleBurghall
Posts : 62 Join date : 2009-10-05
| Subject: Re: Unit 65 Task 1 Wed Dec 09, 2009 12:28 am | |
| looking good at the moment your head needs a bt more shaping but once you have sorted that out i can see it lookin really good well done on the mouth | |
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riley
Posts : 62 Join date : 2009-11-25 Age : 42 Location : liverpool
| Subject: Re: Unit 65 Task 1 Sat Dec 12, 2009 8:29 pm | |
| hi jake like the zombie, al i can say really is wots been mentioned b4 n thats just to round the head off a little. cant wait to c ur animation. ohye good work on the mouth i really struggled with the lips on mine. | |
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Declan
Posts : 59 Join date : 2009-09-30 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: Unit 65 Task 1 Sun Jan 10, 2010 10:27 pm | |
| I can't see your latest batch of screenshots Jakey, is this just me or has the host gone done? | |
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dannyboy91
Posts : 30 Join date : 2009-09-30
| Subject: Re: Unit 65 Task 1 Mon Jan 11, 2010 1:04 am | |
| liking the zombie look jake. Fix that nose though and you'll be in business. | |
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