Unit 33. Animation Pitch. Alex.P

It Started with a Sneeze

Genre:
Superhero

Characters:
Little Girl
Creature
Schoolkids
Teacher
Police
Random Townspeople
Brave Girl
Parents

Pitch:
A little girl with no friends is being bullied in a schoolyard, she runs away and hides and starts crying, wiping her tears with a tissue.
She blows her nose into the tissue and when she pulls it away she sees a small creature in the tissue.
She decides to look after it and starts feeding it and caring for it.

Need an ending so heres a few endings i though of, let me know which is best.

1
It starts to grow too big and she can't hide it in her room so she attempts to move it at night.
She gets spotted by a girl from her school, the creature eats the girl.
It starts eating people and grows even bigger the litttle girl can't stop it.
It reaches the school and starts eating the children, it roars in the face of a girl with an inhaler who sprays it in the face.
The creature starts to melt and everyone is safe, just covered in goo.
Another girl is crying in a different school and she sneezes into a tissue.

2
Other kids find she has the creature.
She runs away and police, parents and townspeople try to find her.
They chase her to a bridge where she stands on the edge.
Someone grabs her and another grabs the tissue they open it.
A sudden noise gets them to look in the air as a spaceship enters through the clouds.
The creature speaks in a deep voice and says goodbye in a jokey way and gets beamed up the ship flies away leaving people dumfounded.

3
Other kids find she has the creature.
She runs away and police, parents and townspeople try to find her.
They chase her to a bridge where she stands on the edge.
People try to bring her down but she won't.
Then another woman steps forward and opens pulls out a tissue with her own creature.
Then everyone else opens their own tissues with their own creatures.

all the ideas are good

i liked the 3rd, because its like shes not alone with this, has some real world meaning

2 all the way. It still has a fun and awesome storyline like the others but then just the extra random part at the end just makes it perfect, and also explains away why the hell she had a creature come out of her nose instead of making her, or everybody a freak.

I voted for idear number 3. It makes the most sense really...
Also I like the story idear

A few of the backgrounds for my animation

Love the really simplistic backgrounds alex, im sure itll look good

awesome backgrounds

I love Fosters Home ;D

Really like this style ^^

Ok since i had to start all over again, i've actually started ALL over again and changed my story aswell, i've started already, i have 2 scenes done which i'll post ASAP.
If the sound loops i apologise, not got around to sorting it out yet.

Here it is, sound quality is crap, but i recorded it on a crap mic, so i've done the best i could (Hopefully i don't lose marks for it)
The kids voice is my girlfriends brother.

http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1264887470

Those voices are actually really really awesome haha. Good job ^^

Unfortunatley i've just discovered that all my voice acting came to Three and a Half minutes long, so i've had to cut half of the dialogue and jokes from the animation ahwell

Unlucky alex, that's one thing that's probably gonna be a bit of a problem for me too, my voice acting is probably going to be going at a stupidly fast pace lol. That's some good lipsyncing too, I doubt you would lose marks for bad quality sound recording, I think it's more about the animation.

Added a bit more, the sound files don't match up too well but i'm not too bothered.
http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1264965187

I don't know why the sound files sound so different, i think i've done something somewhere so i'm going to have to check that.

Try to go back to your original sound files as in the second preview they sound lower quality. If you have Nero at home you could use NeroWaveEditor, it strips the audio file of any noise picked up when recorded.

It's the original sound files that have the problem so i can't really fix it without re -recording it, and that wouldn mean re-animating it, not really got the time to do that.

You can take the noise out of pre recorded sound files, I dont think the sound is too bad for tomorrows assessment but it could be something to think about to resubmit later in the year

the first animation looked spot on too bad you lost it

the new one is very good just you didnt complete it so ...
the voice acting is rather good so just try and finish the rest an show it off