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+7Burrows Sean R ste trev Colin Peters andrew foden Paul Wilson 1990 Alex.P 11 posters |
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Alex.P
Posts : 208 Join date : 2009-09-30 Age : 35 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Creature Concepts Fri Oct 02, 2009 12:32 am | |
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Paul Wilson 1990
Posts : 228 Join date : 2009-09-25 Age : 33 Location : Kirkby
| Subject: constructive comments :D Fri Oct 02, 2009 12:49 am | |
| there really nice designs , you kept them very simple , i like the way you have used the copper wires to make the illusion of hairs very clever , i like the little engines behind the wasp and the fuel tubes its just really good the way you have incorparated engines ect into the wasps and the same for the spider i like the way u can see cogs and gears working in its opisthosoma | |
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andrew foden
Posts : 231 Join date : 2009-09-25 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: Creature Concepts Fri Oct 02, 2009 12:50 am | |
| The black widow is a bit hard to see. The brown pen idea was a good idea, but it just gives me a headache lol. Next time you should probably shade in with brown, and line in using a black pen. It's really well done though, just difficult to make out.
The wasp is looking excellent and I'm really liking the pipes, exhausts and engine bits, and you've done a good job with the head and the shading. =] | |
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Colin Peters
Posts : 117 Join date : 2009-09-25 Age : 33 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Creature Concepts Fri Oct 02, 2009 1:19 pm | |
| the wasp is great, i love the fact that its an engine, which gives it a sense that it would be really powerful and fast i like the look of the spider, the colour makes it look bronze in a steampunk good work wheres the third? | |
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Alex.P
Posts : 208 Join date : 2009-09-30 Age : 35 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Creature Concepts Wed Oct 07, 2009 4:59 pm | |
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Paul Wilson 1990
Posts : 228 Join date : 2009-09-25 Age : 33 Location : Kirkby
| Subject: Re: Creature Concepts Wed Oct 07, 2009 5:07 pm | |
| awesome its looking great so far , cannot wait to see it finished | |
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Alex.P
Posts : 208 Join date : 2009-09-30 Age : 35 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Creature Concepts Fri Oct 09, 2009 5:02 pm | |
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Alex.P
Posts : 208 Join date : 2009-09-30 Age : 35 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Creature Concepts Fri Oct 16, 2009 5:52 pm | |
| 3rd Stage Possibly Final Stage of my Wasp not sure what else to do with it. It feels like it's missing something, any suggestions would be appreciated. =) | |
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ste trev
Posts : 82 Join date : 2009-09-28
| Subject: Re: Creature Concepts Fri Oct 16, 2009 5:57 pm | |
| cool wasp design!! i really like the shiny metallic colour an the eye stands out loads an the detail boss aswell !! good work | |
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Colin Peters
Posts : 117 Join date : 2009-09-25 Age : 33 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Creature Concepts Wed Oct 21, 2009 3:39 pm | |
| awesome painting, seeming as its your first time, great detail. looks abit darker on this computer | |
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Alex.P
Posts : 208 Join date : 2009-09-30 Age : 35 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Creature Concepts Thu Oct 22, 2009 3:01 am | |
| I started on redrawing (mostly tracing) my steampunk spider, this is as much as i've managed to get done but i'm knackered now so going to bed i think , let me know what you guys think of it, are the wires on the legs too much? can't decide if they are making it look too cluttered, i think they add something to the picture, makes it look more plausible as a real moving design. This is a line version without the wires, i kinda like this design too. I'm going to completly redesign the abdomen whichever way i go. | |
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Colin Peters
Posts : 117 Join date : 2009-09-25 Age : 33 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Creature Concepts Thu Oct 22, 2009 4:33 pm | |
| the spider is looking good, but the body is abit flat, and you need to add the other legs also the back [sack thing] is the wrong perspective | |
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Sean R
Posts : 198 Join date : 2009-09-25 Age : 33 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Creature Concepts Thu Oct 22, 2009 5:06 pm | |
| the spider is looking awesome! I really like how the legs look 3d, I think adding colour could improve the body though and maybe make it rounder or more smooth? | |
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Alex.P
Posts : 208 Join date : 2009-09-30 Age : 35 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Creature Concepts Fri Oct 23, 2009 1:01 am | |
| The final lined up drawing for my spider, just needs to be coloured in photoshop, i've given a coloured version to to give and idea fo what it'll kinda look like. Haven't decided on whether i will be using wood and old and brass or rusty metal and old brass. | |
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Burrows
Posts : 210 Join date : 2009-09-28 Age : 33 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Creature Concepts Fri Oct 23, 2009 1:50 am | |
| looking good alex, is that the wood texture that steve gave us earlier?
and i do like the detail in your drawings! | |
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Alex.P
Posts : 208 Join date : 2009-09-30 Age : 35 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Creature Concepts Fri Oct 23, 2009 5:00 am | |
| I am using the wood technique steve showed us, but adding my own twist on it and changin it slightly, plus adding in shading and light textures aswell. So far i've fnihed all the woode bits now i think, going to start adding the mettallic elements soon. | |
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Alex.P
Posts : 208 Join date : 2009-09-30 Age : 35 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Creature Concepts Fri Oct 23, 2009 6:53 am | |
| Some of the metal work, still needs shading | |
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andrew foden
Posts : 231 Join date : 2009-09-25 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: Creature Concepts Fri Oct 23, 2009 11:00 am | |
| looking excellent alex, did you use steve's wood tutorial? Those brass bits make it look really good. | |
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Burrows
Posts : 210 Join date : 2009-09-28 Age : 33 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Creature Concepts Fri Oct 23, 2009 5:40 pm | |
| looking really really good now tbh alex. Love the gold metal with the wood effect, just a few more shadings to do on the gold metal parts and that will be done | |
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Alex.P
Posts : 208 Join date : 2009-09-30 Age : 35 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Creature Concepts Fri Oct 23, 2009 10:45 pm | |
| Finished Spider. | |
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Colin Peters
Posts : 117 Join date : 2009-09-25 Age : 33 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Creature Concepts Sat Oct 24, 2009 4:05 pm | |
| looks awesome, its got a classy feel to it lol, love the detail on the back. and well the detail all over is great | |
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Burrows
Posts : 210 Join date : 2009-09-28 Age : 33 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Creature Concepts Sun Oct 25, 2009 5:58 pm | |
| i really like this, all the gold parts stand out really well! and the glass bit on the body looks really good also | |
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Alex.P
Posts : 208 Join date : 2009-09-30 Age : 35 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Creature Concepts Sun Oct 25, 2009 9:01 pm | |
| Added shading to the spider fo the funs of it. My next creation, i wet with a drogonfl but decided not to add wings or legs so that it wouldn't be too muh like an insect. Goin to make it spaceage-like and add glowing areas to it. | |
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Alex.P
Posts : 208 Join date : 2009-09-30 Age : 35 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Creature Concepts Sun Oct 25, 2009 11:11 pm | |
| Done some detail on my dragonfly not sure where to take it from here. | |
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Ozzfest
Posts : 88 Join date : 2009-09-25
| Subject: Re: Creature Concepts Tue Oct 27, 2009 1:07 am | |
| The flatness seems to be fixed for the spider, really good job akex and the glowing creature looks good also. perhaps you should add some razor sharp wings | |
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