Creature Concepts

Ok this is Picture 1, i Started with well, sort of an ant's body and added some things, head of a stab beetle, scorpion pincers and tail (mechanical) i didnt really like this one but it was my first attempt and yes ino my drawing needs working on >_>

Picture 2 is a Spider, mixed with some strange parts, it is powered by turning its key, kind of like a wind up toy, it has a gasmask for its face, and on its back a sort of gun, some insects have a defensive thing at the back of them that shoots like acid or something lol, but i just wanted to make him look abit cooler, and eviler =]
again my drawings arnt very good >.< but w.e
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I like the clockwork beetle the best, only criticism i can gve is mabe get rid of the defensive gun on the back

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Hmm ok, so since i didnt have a 3rd creatiure thisone is my third, i havnt come upw ith a name for it yet, and i'm not sure what exactly it is, i just used my imagination and threw somethings together. i like this one the most though despite i dont know what it is =]

I like the 3rd one but the face confuses me

I like the third one the best, it kinda reminds me of a manta ray. Altho the one with the gas mask is pretty cool too (:

The third creature is definately one of the best drawings and I hope that translates well into a coloured version. I think you definately need to make it more 3d though.

Keep up the good work, looking good :0

The 3rd looks nice, perhaps you should give him some shark teeth.

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so here is my Dinosar idea finished in photoshop i apologise for all stuff in the picture but i wasnt sure how else to post it without print screening it since it was a photoshop file

The colours are good, especially of the ribs. The horn confuses me.

Colouring looks really good on that (: The shading on the metal bits also looks good.

I do love your drawings lol, they are really good but the idea behind them makes no sense sometimes! haha

especially the third one where u mention the tail would control the gun ontop haha, the colouring is looking good also!

your creatures look good , the one you have coloured in not sure if its finished but i think it needs so shading to give it a 3-d effect so it doesnt look flat, but good colour choice but tbh it looks like something off turok lol

just awfull!
XD

fix it up man re draw it