Creature Concepts - Vito

So my first creature was pretty terrible.



And then it got poorly photo-shopped into something even stranger.



I quickly scrapped that idea and started over.



This character is a warrior bee and doesn't have much of a personality because it's been bred to fight and obey orders.
I've started to edit it in photo-shop but it's not finished yet.

Yeah, the second version looks much better, both colour and detail wise.

Heya Vito, first one kinda reminds me of Barney :O lol
its an interesting idea, however lacks detail, the second one is much better, more detail, more colour.. go with the second.. and keep it up

the second creature definately has potential! I'd love to see the golden parts a bit more shiny and maybe a bit different, as they all look very samey at the moment

yes i agree with sean, looks good and has potential. I think the gold parts could do with some work, take alook at alex's spider, all it needs is a bit of shading and highlight for it to stand off the page!

lookin good up to now though.

The second one looks good, the Metal texture really gives a good effect, nice job vito

first one might some work lol no offense

second one is really good love the armour , but as alex said in class make it black and yellow and put a sort of neon blue colour in the wings

Thanks for the feedback guys ^.^
Your comments really helped and I've added in some of the ideas you suggested.

your first creature is epic its my favorite it will look awsome coloured

his chest is a beast looks boss to bad the actuall character looks like a fag

gd designs just need to see the final designs an then you need to do the third one